Portfolio reflection

Portfolio refection

 

The changes I made to this portfolio assignment were first moving the section that

 

discusses the proposal to the very beginning underneath the due date of the proposal. I

 

think chronologically it works better and it makes more sense to have that content

 

underneath the due date. Then I took out all of the details except the first two bullet

 

points I think the first two bullet points some up what's required.

 

In the audience and purpose section I started that with the second sentence and

 

eliminated everything else because I think it's not needed or necessary and it's just

 

overwhelming. In the first section I took out the beginning and started with the second

 

sentence because that's the actual direction and main point. As far as the questions go I

 

eliminated the communication habits and processes questions because in the

 

communication development those questions are kind of implied in our going to be

 

needed in order to explain the communication development. I found it to be very

 

repetitive.

 

           

In the second section I kept the first little paragraph as the main content in it I

 

think that was the point of what needs to be done for that section. Then I took out the

 

“important” phrase and cut it down.  I took out the first half and left the second. I also

 

took out the planning and drafting section. I felt like this section is something that you

 

can explain in class while you're going over this assignment. I don't think you really need

 

it written out. Then I ended the section with the last bold sentence.

           

In the third section I took out all of the examples. I think that it was just too much

 

detail to say one thing. I started the section with the bold phrase that said “in your a

 

reflection”. For this section and left those bullet points because that's the main content

 

and requiring for this section. I left the portfolio evaluation criteria section the way it is. I

 

think it’s fine the way it is. I didn't change that at all. I looked at that section as rubric and

 

what the overall portfolio should have.


          A lot of the things that I cut out are things that you could actually say in class. It

 

doesn't really need to be written down.  There's always going to be questions in one-way

 

shape or form. So instead of being too detailed now it's more of stating what the main

 

requirements are and then letting the class ask questions. Overall I honestly think the

 

assignment just had too many details in to make it more complex than it needs to be. I

 

just found the main points in each section and got rid of all the unnecessary stuff.